All that is written has my attention. I love books, reading and writing them as well as promoting authors and their work.
This short story was although highly erotic, never really satisfying in a way that tickled the reader in me. It had more a feeling of being a chapter from a book than that of a short. There was no real beginning, nor a real end.
So if you want to read an erotic scene with no real substance this is the—I hesitate to call this a book—thing to reach for. If you expect a well rounded story with a proper arc and characters that have substance look somewhere else.
However, I have to be honest, I did like it. It might not be a literary masterpiece, and have a title that has nothing to do with the content, but it was a nice read never-the-less.